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| This is a temporary place to edit a personal statement for JD's application to ic.ac.uk for a MSc in Advanced Compuer Science. Please feel free to edit things as you feel neccessary. You may want to look at [http://www.davidpashley.com/resume.html my CV]. | This is a temporary place to edit a personal statement for JD's application to ic.ac.uk for a MSc in Advanced Computer Science. Please feel free to edit things as you feel neccessary. You may want to look at [http://www.davidpashley.com/resume.html my CV]. |
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| ----draft 1---- [edit as appropriate for your own interests] I have had an interest in computing for many years; particularly enjoying .... I enjoying applying my mind to the solving of problems, usually showing persistence in persuading something to work. I also particularly enjoy the satisfaction of a well 'shaped' piece of code or a 'neat' proof. This leads me to a specific interest in <blah> areas of CS.... Other subjects which appeal to me are ... for similar reasons. |
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| The MSc at Imperial appeals to those interests, in particular the modules on ... . I want to do an MSc as the first step towards further academic study; blurgh blurgh. <need more> | I have had an interest in computing for many years; Since I got my Dragon 32 at the age of 8. particularly enjoying making the computer dance for me monkey. I enjoying applying my mind to the solving of problems, usually showing persistence in persuading something to work. I have been known to stay awake late getting something to work. I also particularly enjoy the satisfaction of a well 'shaped' piece of code or a 'neat' proof. This leads me to a specific interest in compilers and parsing areas of Computer Science.... Other subjects which appeal to me are complexity, finite automaton and regular expressions for similar reasons. |
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| Outside of paid or academic study I am usually working on some personal computer-related project. These include <debian developer: blurgh blurgh>, etc, etc. I have therefore honed my skills in <wibble, blah> and <demonstrated that I am really interested in this stuff and would work!> | I undertook my B.Sc. at the University of Leeds as I was attracted by the theoretical nature of the course and the chance to develop my programming and mathematical skills. I enjoyed the Functional Programming and Graphics modules and was particularly successful at Compiler Design and Database Design although I feel perhaps this wasn't reflected in my final 2:1 classification. My final year project was designing and implementing a static source code checker for C++, for which I received a first . |
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| I have a broad range of extra-curricular interests including <wibble, blah, blugh, [through which I <developed teamwork skills>], [which requires patience and persistence], [often working late into the night to fix blug]>. I [travel, help, wobble]. In the past I have [taken computer related jobs, eg leeds thing. say?] | The M.Sc. at Imperial appeals to those interests, in particular the modules on Program Analysis and Advanced Issues in Object-oriented Programming. I want to do an MSc as the first step towards further academic study . I would like to acquire a qualification that reflected my ability better than my B.Sc. did and this could help me to progress into further research, possibly a PhD. I am now looking to for further challenges. In the Advanced Computer Science MSc I am looking to build on my final year project and learn more skills and gain more depth into program analysis and compilers. [You'll then need some summary of why you'd be one of the most suitable candidates for their course, what you can offer (terms of commitment, interest) and ] |
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| Since leaving academia, I have worked as a systems administrator for a small computer consultancy. This job has involved using a number of skills learnt from my undergraduate course. I have been required to do a fair amount of programming and analysis. The job has required me to develop my interpersonal skills as it involves a lot of communication with clients. It has also helped me to work to deadlines. While at Leeds I helped to develop a replacement Student database for the department during one summer holiday. [what makes you stand out from any other comsci grad?] Outside of paid or academic study I am usually working on some personal computer-related project. These include working for the Debian Linux distribution. I am currently applying to be a Debian developer. I maintain the irssi IRC client for Debian and help with the KDE packaging for Debian. This packaging work requires patience and persistence and can often involve working late into the night to fix bugs and other problems. I have therefore honed my skills in Linux administration and programming and I think this shows that I have a genuine interest in the course material. I enjoy the challenge and satisfaction gained from the different languages this has required me to learn, including, C, C++, shell scripting, Perl and Python. I have a broad range of extra-curricular interests including juggling and other circus skills. I also have an interest in law and local government. I am a parish councilor, which has helped me to develop teamwork skills. Over the last year I have had the opportunity to attend several technical conferences, including FOSDEM in Brussels and Debconf in Oslo. This provided a fantastic chance to meet up with like-minded people, exchange ideas and news, and start on new projects [?]. I am also a member of several local Linux user groups and have presented several talks to the groups which has allowed me to develop my public speaking skills. I am interested in the research pathway and would require funding. |
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| I undertook my BSc at the University of Leeds as I was attracted by [blah, blah] in the course and the chance to develop [blah, blah]. I enjoyed [blah, blah] and was particularly successful at [blah - maybe give examples of modules other than your project], although I feel perhaps this wasn't reflected in my final 2:1 classification. I am now looking to for further challenges. In the Advanced Computer Science MSc I am looking to build on [blah, blah - why does this course seem so damned good??? Does it build on work already undertaken???] |
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| Maybe mention you work at Parguild. What are the transferable skills that would help you with your course, and what makes you stand out from any other comsci grad? It might be more important to put 'other non-academic achievements' before stuff about Parguild. Surely your work with Debian is a big achievement?!? I'd put down that you actually enjoy the challenge and satisfaction gained from mastering all the languages you know, but avoid the word 'tinkering' at all costs - it infers playing about, like guys might tinker with a classic car at the weekend but never actually get it fixed and on the road! I'd avoid phrases like: "I program a range of languages for fun " - somehow even though I know you do, it somehow sounds fake (I really do, honestly!). "I also enjoy travelling to technical conferences" from your CV doesn't sound right - do you just like the journey or something? NO! So maybe re-phrase: This year I have had the opportunity to attend [blah. Blah]. This provided a fantastic chance to meet up with like-minded people, exchange ideas and news, and start on new projects [?]. I am also a member of ([list geek groups!] and why this is a good thing). You'll then need some summary of why you'd be one of the most suitable candidates for their course, what you can offer (terms of commitment, interest) and what you would like to achieve through the MSc and how this could help you progress into... further research? |
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Draft 3ish. Thought I'd have a go as I didn't see this the other night. Hope it will be of some use - let me know and get it done!! ;) ----- I have had an interest in computing for many years since I got my Dragon 32 at the age of 8 [expand to some kind of introduction] I undertook my BSc. at the University of Leeds as I was attracted by the theoretical nature of the course and the chance to develop my programming and mathematical skills. I enjoyed the Functional Programming and Graphics modules, and was particularly successful at Compiler Design and Database Design (although I feel perhaps my achievements were not reflected in my final 2:1 classification). My final year project was designing and implementing a static source code checker for C++, for which I received a first. While at Leeds I also helped to develop a replacement Student database for the department during one summer holiday [anything else that could show 'em how good you are?!] Since graduating in 2001 I have worked as a systems administrator for a small computer consultancy. This job has involved using a number of skills acquired during my undergraduate studies [such as...?]. I have been required to do a fair amount of programming and analysis [and...? this seems too short]. The job has required me to develop my communication skills as it involves a lot of time working with clients, and it has also helped me to work to deadlines. Outside of paid or academic study I am usually involved in computer-related projects, including working for the Debian Linux distribution. I maintain the irssi IRC client and help with the KDE packaging for Debian as I apply to become a [cetified/accredited/recognised?]Debian developer. This packaging work requires patience and persistence, and can often involve dedicating extra time to fix bugs and other problems. As a result, I have honed my skills in Linux administration and programming [the next bit sounds a little unnecessary, but include it if you want!...] and I think this shows that I have a genuine interest in the course material. I enjoy the challenge and satisfaction gained from learning the different languages required, including, C, C++, shell scripting, Perl and Python. In addition to my computer-related work, I enjoy juggling, music and have an interest in law and local government. I am also a parish councilor, which has helped me to develop organizational and teamwork skills. Over the last year I have had the opportunity to attend several technical conferences, including FOSDEM in Brussels and Debconf in Oslo. This provided a fantastic chance to meet up with like-minded people, exchange ideas and news, and start on new projects [?]. I am also a member of several local Linux user groups and have presented several talks to the groups, strengthening my public speaking skills. Many aspects of the MSc. at Imperial appeal to the interests outlined, in particular the modules on Program Analysis and Advanced Issues in Object-oriented Programming, along with the areas of complexity, finite automaton and regular expressions. Through your course I am looking to build on work undertaken for final year project, to learn more skills [skills in what, or just generally?] and consolidate my knowledge of program analysis and compilers. I am interested in the research pathway, and I want to undertake an MSc. as the first step towards further academic study, possibly a PhD. I enjoy applying my mind to the solving of problems. I show persistence in making something work and I will always put in the time and effort required to obtain the best possible results. I take great satisfaction and pride in a well 'shaped' piece of code or a 'neat' proof as I have a specific interest in compilers and parsing areas of Computer Science. [You'll then need some final summary of why you'd be one of the most suitable candidates for their course, and anything else you could offer!] ----- |
This is a temporary place to edit a personal statement for JD's application to ic.ac.uk for a MSc in Advanced Computer Science. Please feel free to edit things as you feel neccessary. You may want to look at [http://www.davidpashley.com/resume.html my CV].
The Question says:
Supplementary Personal Statement - Describe your academic interests and reasons for applying. Include details of work experience you consider relevant to your proposed study, careers objectives and relevant non-academic achievements. Expand on a separate sheet if required.
The Notes also have this to say: Use this space to tell us why you are interested in the subject for which you have applied. Describe your academic interests and reasons for applying to Imperial College. Selectors place particular importance on the personal statement.
- PhD:
ooh that looks scary when written down
- Computers:
okay need to mention a few things here
- Compilers, source code checking, clint
- debian
- general interest? tinkering? list programming etc.
- many programming languages mentioned in CV
- -done any fixing for local people? -degree? dissertation?
- jobs:
- Cranfield - skills?
- Leeds Uni Summer programming job, teaching lower years. shows good communication and an understanding of your subject.
- PGL - skills? relevance???
- Parish council, law, music: juggling?
- Skills: Parish council - skills?
- Juggling, photography - skills? badminton, music - relevant? if so - variety? anything else?
- Skills: Parish council - skills?
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I have had an interest in computing for many years; Since I got my Dragon 32 at the age of 8. particularly enjoying making the computer dance for me monkey. I enjoying applying my mind to the solving of problems, usually showing persistence in persuading something to work. I have been known to stay awake late getting something to work. I also particularly enjoy the satisfaction of a well 'shaped' piece of code or a 'neat' proof. This leads me to a specific interest in compilers and parsing areas of Computer Science.... Other subjects which appeal to me are complexity, finite automaton and regular expressions for similar reasons.
I undertook my B.Sc. at the University of Leeds as I was attracted by the theoretical nature of the course and the chance to develop my programming and mathematical skills. I enjoyed the Functional Programming and Graphics modules and was particularly successful at Compiler Design and Database Design although I feel perhaps this wasn't reflected in my final 2:1 classification. My final year project was designing and implementing a static source code checker for C++, for which I received a first .
The M.Sc. at Imperial appeals to those interests, in particular the modules on Program Analysis and Advanced Issues in Object-oriented Programming. I want to do an MSc as the first step towards further academic study . I would like to acquire a qualification that reflected my ability better than my B.Sc. did and this could help me to progress into further research, possibly a PhD. I am now looking to for further challenges. In the Advanced Computer Science MSc I am looking to build on my final year project and learn more skills and gain more depth into program analysis and compilers. [You'll then need some summary of why you'd be one of the most suitable candidates for their course, what you can offer (terms of commitment, interest) and ]
Since leaving academia, I have worked as a systems administrator for a small computer consultancy. This job has involved using a number of skills learnt from my undergraduate course. I have been required to do a fair amount of programming and analysis. The job has required me to develop my interpersonal skills as it involves a lot of communication with clients. It has also helped me to work to deadlines. While at Leeds I helped to develop a replacement Student database for the department during one summer holiday. [what makes you stand out from any other comsci grad?]
Outside of paid or academic study I am usually working on some personal computer-related project. These include working for the Debian Linux distribution. I am currently applying to be a Debian developer. I maintain the irssi IRC client for Debian and help with the KDE packaging for Debian. This packaging work requires patience and persistence and can often involve working late into the night to fix bugs and other problems. I have therefore honed my skills in Linux administration and programming and I think this shows that I have a genuine interest in the course material. I enjoy the challenge and satisfaction gained from the different languages this has required me to learn, including, C, C++, shell scripting, Perl and Python.
I have a broad range of extra-curricular interests including juggling and other circus skills. I also have an interest in law and local government. I am a parish councilor, which has helped me to develop teamwork skills.
Over the last year I have had the opportunity to attend several technical conferences, including FOSDEM in Brussels and Debconf in Oslo. This provided a fantastic chance to meet up with like-minded people, exchange ideas and news, and start on new projects [?]. I am also a member of several local Linux user groups and have presented several talks to the groups which has allowed me to develop my public speaking skills.
I am interested in the research pathway and would require funding.
how many words? don't you think you should be at least attempting to draft this? when should it be done by?
Draft 3ish. Thought I'd have a go as I didn't see this the other night. Hope it will be of some use - let me know and get it done!! 
I have had an interest in computing for many years since I got my Dragon 32 at the age of 8 [expand to some kind of introduction]
I undertook my BSc. at the University of Leeds as I was attracted by the theoretical nature of the course and the chance to develop my programming and mathematical skills. I enjoyed the Functional Programming and Graphics modules, and was particularly successful at Compiler Design and Database Design (although I feel perhaps my achievements were not reflected in my final 2:1 classification). My final year project was designing and implementing a static source code checker for C++, for which I received a first. While at Leeds I also helped to develop a replacement Student database for the department during one summer holiday [anything else that could show 'em how good you are?!]
Since graduating in 2001 I have worked as a systems administrator for a small computer consultancy. This job has involved using a number of skills acquired during my undergraduate studies [such as...?]. I have been required to do a fair amount of programming and analysis [and...? this seems too short]. The job has required me to develop my communication skills as it involves a lot of time working with clients, and it has also helped me to work to deadlines.
Outside of paid or academic study I am usually involved in computer-related projects, including working for the Debian Linux distribution. I maintain the irssi IRC client and help with the KDE packaging for Debian as I apply to become a [cetified/accredited/recognised?]Debian developer. This packaging work requires patience and persistence, and can often involve dedicating extra time to fix bugs and other problems. As a result, I have honed my skills in Linux administration and programming [the next bit sounds a little unnecessary, but include it if you want!...] and I think this shows that I have a genuine interest in the course material. I enjoy the challenge and satisfaction gained from learning the different languages required, including, C, C++, shell scripting, Perl and Python. In addition to my computer-related work, I enjoy juggling, music and have an interest in law and local government. I am also a parish councilor, which has helped me to develop organizational and teamwork skills.
Over the last year I have had the opportunity to attend several technical conferences, including FOSDEM in Brussels and Debconf in Oslo. This provided a fantastic chance to meet up with like-minded people, exchange ideas and news, and start on new projects [?]. I am also a member of several local Linux user groups and have presented several talks to the groups, strengthening my public speaking skills.
Many aspects of the MSc. at Imperial appeal to the interests outlined, in particular the modules on Program Analysis and Advanced Issues in Object-oriented Programming, along with the areas of complexity, finite automaton and regular expressions. Through your course I am looking to build on work undertaken for final year project, to learn more skills [skills in what, or just generally?] and consolidate my knowledge of program analysis and compilers. I am interested in the research pathway, and I want to undertake an MSc. as the first step towards further academic study, possibly a PhD. I enjoy applying my mind to the solving of problems. I show persistence in making something work and I will always put in the time and effort required to obtain the best possible results. I take great satisfaction and pride in a well 'shaped' piece of code or a 'neat' proof as I have a specific interest in compilers and parsing areas of Computer Science. [You'll then need some final summary of why you'd be one of the most suitable candidates for their course, and anything else you could offer!]